page 034 ~ read right to left - August 17th, 2011, 12:39 pm
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[Posted by Cataki on August 17th, 2011, 12:44 pm]

I'm SOOOO sorry for the shitty first panel, but I'm really not very skilled in drawing backgrounds v_v...
and... the sentence sounds wrong but I don't know why. Is that proper english?

The next few days I'm at the gamescom in Cologne, so there'll be no updates 'till next week :) Hope you understand that!



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[Posted by DaShou on August 17th, 2011, 12:50 pm]

Well. xD I understand if you aren't fluent in a language or something....

"Doesen't" should be doesn't. xD


But I love the page. xD I can't draw backgrounds to save my life so good job! :D



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[Posted by EmoVampireNinjaPimp on August 17th, 2011, 1:11 pm]

There's nothing wrong with the grammar so don't worry about that XD

And the backgrounds are great!



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[Posted by KiyaChan on August 17th, 2011, 1:35 pm]

I did a total face palm after reading this page... he makes me want to smack him upside the head so hard -_-



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Grammar? (Oops typo! Thank you!) [Posted by JustSaying (Guest) on August 17th, 2011, 1:54 pm]

There's nothing wrong with a little slang language in these comics, it gives the character a feeling of what they're capable of saying.

However, if you want some help. I believe "wanna" is supposed to be "want to", for "wanna" isn't a word to use for correct grammar. It's a slang language. Which is fine, so you don't have to redo it. It's normal to have this kind of speech in comics. Don't worry about it. :)

I love your comic by the way! :DDD The art and plot is so brain-snatching.



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[Posted by tangyskittles on August 17th, 2011, 1:56 pm]

...

I usually don't hate on characters in the first chapter but seriously?

This guy clearly doesn't listen. I'm, like, borderline gonna smack his face for this sentence.

I really do hate selfish people.



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[Posted by Zitronenbaum on August 17th, 2011, 2:36 pm]

D'awww, Sunny, can't you guess? D:

Also, guys, what's with the talk about grammar here? xD (With an 'a' please!)
If it's still understandable then it's just fine. :')



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[Posted by Faery Goddyss on August 17th, 2011, 3:10 pm]

Yeah, I'm kinda with other people here. I can't feel sorry for this guy at all. Either of them really...but I still like the comic. :D



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-_- [Posted by NekoMelMel on August 17th, 2011, 4:07 pm]

really? r u really asking urself dat? THE ANSWER SHOULD BE FREAKING OBVIOUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



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[Posted by wafflecon on August 17th, 2011, 5:25 pm]

sexay bodayyyyy



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Sunnny [Posted by This.Is.Evol on August 17th, 2011, 6:16 pm]

*viciously shakes Sunny*
He confessssed to you! and you rejected him!



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[Posted by Mitani on August 17th, 2011, 7:36 pm]

Oh gosh, this is just so wonderfully drawn, the expressions are just... so expressive <3



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[Posted by Moondragon on August 17th, 2011, 11:42 pm]

Umm, possibly because he doesn't want to torment himself by being nearing you? Jerk.



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[Posted by Heldrad on August 18th, 2011, 1:08 pm]

aww :) well, I'm surprised he still wants to be his friend despite deejay being gay and liking him~ That shows that he isn't that prejudiced against gays... I think other guys would be disgusted and would start giving him the cold shoulder...



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[Posted by Forbidden_Requiem on August 19th, 2011, 11:33 pm]

gawwwwd clueless man is clueless



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[Posted by DoubleStroke on August 20th, 2011, 2:16 pm]

I'm waiting for updates! Totally in love with your comic and style!


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